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Director- Riddhi Cameraman- Aditya Art Director- Radhika Music, Sound Effects- Yash Lighting- Chetna media type="file" key="birds.mp3" align="right" width="240" height="20" media type="file" key="MP3Cut_Evanescence - Bring Me To Life23-08-2010084735PM.mp3" align="right" width="240" height="20" media type="file" key="The Final Countdown23-08-2010082715PM.mp3" align="right" width="240" height="20"


 * SCREENPLAY**

INT. BUNGLOW- MUMBAI- MORNING- 2001 RITA PUSHES the door open, slowly. She sees a large group of people, all dressed in simple, white clothes, all gathered around a dead body, covered in a white cloth. Seeing her father’s body covered in a white sheet and flowers all over, she is devastated. She begins CRYING and is really upset, as she realizes that her biological father is also no more. RITA My father! I never even knew him!

EXT. BUNGALOW- CONTINUOUS Unable to bear what she SAW (always use the present tense) , she walks out of the house, into the garden. She is still crying, and thinking about her loss, when suddenly, a hand REACHES out for her shoulder, out of nowhere.

ANIL He was my father too! Rita TURNS around, surprised, to see ANIL standing in front of her, in white clothes too. She had not seen him for a long time, several years, but she remembered him very well. How could she forget, after all that happened, long ago... At first she is too shocked and confused to say anything. She just STARES blankly into his eyes. Then comprehension dawns on her.

RITA Anil?! So that’s why you...? A tear trickles down Rita’s cheek as she recalls those events that happened 8 years ago...

INT. CAFE- EVENING- FLASHBACK- 1993 Anil and Rita are in a cafe. Both of them are having a great time. Anil is sitting opposite Rita and with a smile he GIVES her a bunch of flowers. Then they cut a cake and give a piece to each other, LAUGHING and talking happily. Rita has a beautiful ring on her finger, and is looking very happy.

RITA I love you!

PARK- LATER Anil and Rita are SITTING on a bench and TALKING to each other. There are birds CHIRPING in the background and it’s a bright sunny day.

RITA I’m so happy, Anil

ANIL Me too...

EXT. ANIL’S HOUSE- NEXT DAY Rita is returning home, but to her surprise she sees Anil outside the house, talking to someone. She goes closer, and she sees Anil talking intently to a man she’s never seen before.

RITA

What’s going on? Who is that man...? After a while the man hands Anil a letter. Anil reads it quickly and he is evidently very upset. He talks for a little while with the man, after which the man leaves the house. Anil stands there for some time, then turns and begins walking towards. He LOOKS at her with a sad expreesion on his face. RITA Anil... What is that in your hand? ANIL I’m sorry, Rita. I can’t marry you...I love you, but as a brother...

As he is TALKING he holds her hand and slowly REMOVES the ring from her finger. RITA No! Anil! What happened?! With a last look at her, Anil walks away from her life forever. Until now. BLACKOUT

ASSESSMENT CRITERIA FOR SCREEN WRITING
 * Originality of the script- 4
 * Development of Ideas- conflict, characterisation and setting-4
 * Conventions of screenplay 4.5
 * Spelling Grammar and Punctuation: 4.5

Total: 17/20 Good job! You have created a convincing scene and thought through the actions and character development

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-adi

Oh yay :D We did well, Despite our amazing director and her skills :P (jk.)