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**THE LETTER**
Director: Kanishq Chhabria Camera person: Pranati Wadhawan Art Director: Tara Parambi Music, Sound Effects and Lighting: Pritish Shah,Anushka Shetty

Group 1:Screenplay:The Letter
 * 1) Characters: Anushka-Main Character Anushka(victim) Pranati- Pranati(witness) Kanishq-Detective Pritish-Murderer

Interior Corridor.Dhirubhai Ambani International School.Bandra Kurla Complex.Mumbai.India (Isolated Corridor. Silence. Only Noise Of Footsteps:-Anushka walking.)
 * 1) Anushka Is Walking Through The Corridor. She opens her locker. BLACKOUT. (Sound of scream.Sound Of 2 Gunshots) "THERE IS NO LETTER" (who is saying this dialogue?)  (Blackout clears) Pranati has seen everthing. She is a witness. Soon the news spreads. Detective Sorenson is called. (action is very jumpy. Too much happening not enough development of character)  INTERIOR ADMINISTRATOR'S OFFICE.DAIS.MUMBAI. Detective is interviewing Pranati. <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">Pranati:I didnt see the face but i saw a gun.Also he was searching for something.Before dying Anushka told me a number and im guessing it was her locker no.The murderer also said "there is no letter'. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">(formatting of dialogue is incorrect)  <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">INTERIOR CORRIDOR.DAIS.MUMBAI. <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">Kanishq opens the locker and finds a letter. He reads it. It says: <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">Dear Anushka, <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">............................... <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">(apostrophe is used incorrectly) Regard's, Mr Bing. <span style="display: block; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif;">THE END....

ASSESSMENT CRITERIA FOR SCREEN WRITING
 * Originality of the script- 3
 * Development of Ideas- conflict, characterisation and setting-3
 * Conventions of screenplay 3
 * Spelling Grammar and Punctuation: 3

Total: 12/20

Teacher CommentsThere is some attempt to create suspense which is fairly successful.


 * 1) The end is unclear- where did the inheritance aspect come from?
 * 2) Character development needs work